Nice character, cool composition +8

Nice simple colours. Would like to see her whole body and maybe not crop it so tight.

I like the elongated format.....and simplicity is striking..very clean well structured lines.

Nice work, simple and clean. The thighs look way too big for such a small body though. Nice colours
+7

like Diane said, her hips are to wide compared with the rest of her little body. the neck has a wierd shape aslo... And I think her breast seems a little bit off. try to erase the line under it and just put a little shadow under the breast instead. anyway, very good work. I like the concept. And I think white really makes the girl pop out of the picture. the dress is well shaded as well. 9+

pretty good! yeah, agree with Diane and her one hand seems a lil too large. Nice work tho

thanks for the feedback everyone!
Yes, i can see all the oddities now that they've been mentioned. I don't think i'll fiddle with this, but i'll keep it in mind for my next post. when i started the drawing i intended to do a low angle perspective, but couldn't get it to work properly, and i think the oddity with the thighs and the one hand is due to that. i completely forgot about it. the neck is just my bad. i need to look more at necks. i'm not a neck man . ta all, all critique duely (how's that spelled) noted.

i think i might fiddle with the line under the breast.....

just finished updating this.... cleaned some of the lines, made the background less bothersome, tried to fix the neck and breasts. would appreciate feedback!

Haven't seen the earlier version, so I can't say if you've improved it or not, but here's what I'm thinking.

• Like already mentioned: Show her legs.
• Work a little more on the hair. Some additional strokes could do the trick. If you're into manga. check this
• I'd increase the size of the blade in her right hand or at least change the angle of it. It looks more like a butter knife like that. But I assume that she's supposed to an assassin...
• The shade between light and shadow on metal always looks hard and not soft! Get yourself a knife out of your kitchen and look for yourself.

I know that's quite a lot, but I still like your painting. It has a very cool mood!
Keep it up!

Nice style of the drawing !